中考英语高分作文锦集(陕西卷)
2021《陕西卷》
一、中考真题
人们常说：“服务他人，快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的暑假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格提示内容，给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文，介绍你的计划。
Places Activities
Community center help the old, sing songs, tell stories.…
Community hospital(s) hand out the leaflets (宣传册)on COVID-19.
Community park(5) pick up rubbish, water flowers,…
要求：
1.参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)
As we all know, “Serving others can bring us happiness." Summer holiday is coming. I'll
I'm sure I will have a meaningful holiday this summer.
二、思路点拨
本文要求考生给校英文报写一篇短文，介绍自己在即将到来的暑期为社区服务的计划。开头段的部分内容和结尾段已经给出，考生的写作任务主要是补充开头段和完成主体段。补充开头段时，要注意承上启下，既要与第一段已给的内容自然衔接，又要自然地引出主体段的内容。
主体段要有条理地将各种活动介绍清楚，比如去社区中心看望老人，去社区医院发防疫宜传册，去社区公园捡垃圾、浇花，等等。此外，考生可以适当添加细节，比如给社区中心的老人照相、在社区医院做义工等。具体写作时，要使用恰当的连接词，使文章读起来自然、流畅并有层次感。
三、写作要点
体裁 记叙文
话题 为社区服务的计划
人称 第一人称
时态 一般将来时
开头段 部分开头内容已给出，补充的句子要与下文衔接得当
主体段
1.在社区中心帮助老人，给他们唱歌、讲故事
2.在社区医院发防疫宣传册
3.在社区公园捡垃圾，给花浇水
结尾段 题目中已给出
实用词语
helpful, kind, considerate, friendship, report, decision, volunteer,
suggestion, warmth, environment, awareness, give a hand to
提分句型
I will do what I can do for...
I believe it's a good way to .
It was difficult for her to...
I will go to community parks to ..
I am going to hand out the leaflets …
四、高分范文
(一)Sample 1
As we all know, "Serving others can bring us happi- ness." Summer holiday is coming.I'll do some voluntary work for my community.
Firstly, I will go to the community center,where the old people gather. I will do what I can to help them, such as lifting heavy things.I can also sing songs and tell them stories. Secondly, I will hand out the leaflets onCOVID-19 at the community hospital in order to raise people's health awareness" . Finally, I will pick up rubbish
and water flowers in the community park to create a good environment.
I'm sure I will have a meaningful holiday this summer.
众所周知：“服务他人能为我们带来快乐。”暑假就要来了，我打算为我的社区做一些志愿工作。
首先，我会去社区中心，那是老人们聚集的地方。我会帮老人们做些力所能及的事，比如搬重物。我也会给他们唱歌，讲故事。其次，我会去社区医院分发关于新冠肺炎的宣传册，以便提高人们的健康意识。最后，我会去社区公园捡垃圾和浇花，为创造良好的环境做贡献。
我相信今年夏天我会度过一个有意义的假期。
(二)Sample 2
As we all know, "Serving others can bring us happi- ness." Summer holiday is coming. I'lldo something to serve others in the community.
To begin with, I intend to sing songs for the old,talk with them and listen to their stories at the communitycenter.Next, I am going to hand out the leaflets onCOVID-19 at the community hospital. It's necessary for us to learn more about the epidemic.What's more, in order to make the environment clean and beautiful，lwill pick up rubbish and water flowers together with other volunteers in the community park.
I'm sure I will have a meaningful holiday this summer.
众所周知：“服务他人能为我们带来快乐。”暑假就要来了，我打算在社区做些事来服务他人。
首先，我打算为社区中心的老人们唱歌，与他们聊天，倾听他们的故事。其次，我打算在社区医院分发关于新冠肺炎的宣传册。我们有必要多去了解关于疫情的信息。再次，为了使环境清洁、优美，我将和其他志愿者一起到社区公园捡垃圾和浇花。
我相信今年夏天我会度过一个有意义的假期。
(三)Sample 3
As we all know,"Serving others can bring us happi- ness." Summer holiday is coming. I'll do some community service work.
I will go to the community center first. I will help the old who are disabled, and sing songs or tell stories to bring laughter and joy to them. Next, I will go to the community hospital to hand out the leaflets on COVID-19and tell people the ways of preventing viruses. In addi- tion, to make the community park clean and beautiful. I plan to pick up rubbish and water flowers there. I find it would be satisfied to serve others.
I'm sure I will have a meaningful holiday this summer.
众所周知：“服务他人能为我们带来快乐。”暑假就要来了，我打算做些社区服务工作。首先，我会去社区中心。我将帮助残疾老人，为他们唱歌或讲故事，给他们带去欢声笑语。其次，我会去社区医院分发关于新冠肺炎的宣传册，告诉人们预防病毒的方法。最后，为了使社区公园干净、美丽，我计划去那里捡垃圾和浇花。我发现服务他人能让我满足。
我相信今年夏天我会度过一个有意义的假期。
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