中考英语高分作文锦集(上海卷)

　　一、中考真题

　　你的学校正在为各类活动招募教学小助手(teaching assistant)，包括球类(Ball Games).演讲(Speech)，器乐(Instrumental Music)，戏剧(Drama)，手工(Handicrafts)，摄影(Photography)。

　　假如你是李华，请给教导处张老师写一封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说明你想担任哪一门活动课的小助手及理由。

　　注意：

　　1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分；

　　2.照抄阅读语篇不得分；

　　3.词数不少于100。

　　二、思路点拨

　　本题要求给老师写一封信争取教学小助手的职位。首先，信件的开头段要做个简单的自我介绍，并说明自己写信的来意——想要担任某一门活动课的小助手。其次，主体段要结合自己的兴趣和特长，详细解释自己想担任这个职位的理由，比如“我”很擅长这类活动，或者非常热爱这项运动，想提高自己的某种能力等。此外，还可以说说自己的优点，比如细心、热情、善于沟通、勤奋等，以此来证明自己有能力担任这份工作。结尾段可以再强调一下自己对这份工作的渴望，希望老师能给自己一个展现能力的机会。

　　三、写作要点

　　体裁: 应用文(书信)

　　话题: 自荐担任教学小助手

　　人称: 第一人称

　　时态: 一般现在时

　　开头段: 自我介绍，并说明自己想要担任哪一门活动课的小助手

　　主体段: 结合自己的兴趣和特长，详细说明自己想担任这个职位的理由

　　结尾段: 总结全文，表明自己对这份工作的渴望

　　实用词语

　　recruil, organize, position, persistent, practice, prize, arard competiton,careful,enthusiastic, passionate, outgcing, be eager to, har working, fight for, be sutable for, be interested in, be immene

　　in, be good at, insist on

　　提分句型

　　I'm writing to ask for the position of ...

　　I am really fond of ...

　　It's suitable for me to ...

　　It's my advantage that..…

　　It's a good chance to improve myself.

　　I will make full use of this opportunity to ...

　　I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity.

　　四、高分范文

　　(一)Sample 1

　　Dear Mrhttps://baijiahao.baidu.com/Ms. Zhang,

　　I'm Li Hua, a grade three student of our school.

　　I'm writing to ask for the position of instrumental music teaching assistant, which I think is suitable for me.

　　I am really fond of playing the piano. I have been learning it since I was a child, and I would be immersed in the wonderful music every time I play it. What's be immersed in, wonderful. more, I once won the first prize of the piano competition patience , which shows that I'm good at playing the piano. Besides, I have enough patience,which will

　　be useful to be a teaching assistant.

　　Overall, I believe I can do this job well. I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity.

　　Best wishes,

　　Li Hua

　　敬爱的张老师：

　　我叫李华，是我校的一名初三学生。我给您写这封信，是为了争取器乐教学小助手的职位，我认为这个职位很适合我。

　　我很喜欢弹钢琴，从小就开始学，每次弹钢琴我都会沉浸在美妙的音乐中。而且，我曾在我们学校举行的钢琴比赛中获得第一名，这证明我很擅长弹钢琴。此外，我是个很有耐心的人，这一点对担任教学小助手很有用。

　　总之，我相信自己能当好一名教学小助手。如果您能给我这个机会，我将不胜感激。

　　祝福你！

　　李华

　　(二)Sample2

　　Dear Mrhttps://baijiahao.baidu.com/Ms. Zhang,

　　My name is Li Hua. I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a teaching assistant for ball games, especially volleyball.

　　I am the captain of the women's volleyball our school and I have been playing volleyball for five years. Moreover, it's suitable for me to do this job for my outgoing and friendly character. I think I can help other students learn to play volleyball well.

　　I would really appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity. Looking forward to your reply.

　　Best wishes,

　　Li Hua

　　敬爱的张老师：

　　我叫李华，写这封信给您意在自荐做球类活动的助教，尤其是排球。

　　我是校女子排球队的现任队长，已经打排球五年了，加上我的性格外向、待人友好，这些都是我适合做这份工作的原因。我认为自己能帮助其他同学学好打排球。如果您能给我这个机会，我将不胜感激。期待能收到您的回复。

　　祝福你！

　　李华

　　(三)Sample 3

　　Dear Mrhttps://baijiahao.baidu.com/Ms. Zhang,

　　My name is Li Hua. I am writing to apply for the position of teaching assistant of photography activity class. As a photography enthusiast, I love taking photos very much and have had some basic knowledge and skills. In the photography activity class, I could help others, make more friends and improve my skills.Moreover, I once served as the monitor of class, which is good for organizing photography activities. There is no doubt that my experience is of great value to the job.

　　It would be much appreciated if you could give me a chance.Looking forward to hearing from you.

　　Best wishes,

　　Li Hua

　　敬爱的张老师：

　　我叫李华，我写信是为了申请成为摄影活动课的教学小助手。作为一个摄影爱好者，我非常喜欢摄影，并已掌握了一些基础的知识和技能。我渴望在摄影活动课上帮助他人，结交更多朋友，以及提高我的技术。而且，我曾担任过班长，这有助于组织摄影活动。毫无疑问，我的经历对这份工作有非常大的价值。

　　如果您能给我这次机会，我将不胜感激。期待收到您的来信。

　　祝福你！

　　李华

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