中考英语高分作文锦集(浙江宁波卷)

　　2021《浙江宁波卷》

　　一、中考真题

　　假如你是李华，上个月你校举行了“祖国在我心中”的主题活动(theme event)，请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历，写一篇英语短文，向你校英语报投稿注意：1.短文必须包括导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；

　　2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

　　3.词数80～100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。

　　1. purpose:express love for our country

　　2.activities:

　　sing red songs,…

　　3. my experience;

　　Motherland

　　in My Heart

　　4. my feelings:… 5.my hope:...

　　Motherland in My Heart

　　二、思路点拨

　　本题要求考生以“祖国在我心中”红色主题校园活动为线索，结合导图中给出的信息，以李华的身份参与活动，写出“我”参加这个活动的经历及感受，表达对祖国真挚的祝福与期盼。首先，可以简单交代活动的主题与目的；其次，主体段具体介绍活动内容，如唱红歌、看红色电影、诗歌朗诵比赛等，顺便描述这段经历给“我”的感受；最后，收束全文，升华主题。

　　三、写作要点

　　体裁: 记叙文

　　话题: 题活动

　　人称: 第一人称

　　时态: 一般过去时

　　开头段: 交代你校开展了“祖国在我心中”的主题活动，并说明活动目的

　　主体段: 具体介绍活动内容，写出自己的经历，描述自己的感受

　　结尾段: 表达对祖国的美好祝愿

　　实用词语:

　　significant, meaningful, various,impress, patriotism, performance,

　　poetry, competition, prosperous, take part in, praise highly

　　提分句型:

　　We took part in various activities, including...

　　What impressed me most was that ...

　　We actively prepared for ...

　　Everyone was excited in...

　　We did well in ...

　　It's such a good way to arouse ..

　　I hope that our motherland could be more ...

　　I'm proud of being...

　　四、高分范文

　　(一)Sample 1

　　Motherland in My Heart

　　Last month, a large-scale theme event called Mother- land in My Heart was held in our school. It is the best time for us to express love to our motherland.

　　We took part in various activities like reciting poems, creating theme posters, watching the stage show of the red theme and so on. What impressed me most was that we sangredsongs together with teachers and classmates.We had actively prepared for it during the class break every day and did well in the final performance. Everyone was quite excited at that moment.

　　This significant event gave us an excellent chance to praise highly of our motherland.All of us will try our best to build our country. I wish our motherland become more beautiful and more prosperous.

　　祖国在我心中

　　上个月，一个名为“祖国在我心中”的大型主题活动在我校开展，这是我们向祖国表达爱的最好时机。

　　我们参加了各种各样的活动，包括诗歌朗诵、创作主题海报和欣赏红色主题舞台表演等。令我印象最深刻的是与老师和同学一起唱红歌。我们每天都在课间积极准备，并在最后的演出中表现出色。那一刻，每个人都感到非常激动。

　　这个意义非凡的活动给了我们一个绝佳的机会去歌颂祖国。我们所有人都会尽自己最大的努力去建设我们的国家。祝愿我们的祖国变得更美丽、更繁荣。

　　(二)Sample 2

　　Motherland in My Heart

　　Last month, a theme event called Motherland in My Heart was held successfully in our school,which was for the purpose of expressing love to our country.

　　There were a variety of activities such as singing red songs, watching red movies and telling stories about the Red Army. After watching a movie about the founding of our country, I was deeply touched. It is so respectable that those great people devoted everything to our country.

　　In my opinion, it's such a good way to arouse students

　　love to our country by holding an event like this.I hope that our motherland could be more prosperous and stronger in the future.

　　祖国在我心中

　　上个月，我们学校成功举办了一个名为“祖国在我心中”的主题活动，目的是表达对祖国的爱。

　　活动内容多种多样，如唱红歌、看红色电影、讲关于红军的故事等。看完一部关于建国的电影后，我被深深感动了。那些伟大的人物为国家奉献了一切，他们太值得尊敬了。

　　在我看来，举办这样的活动是唤起学生的爱国情怀的好方法。我希望我们的祖国将来能更加繁荣富强。

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